The summer is my favorite season because:
~Hang out with friends outside
~Swimming
~Long walks
~Go to the Cidermill
~Bikeriding
~Beach
~Stoney Creek
~Adventures in the woods
~Rollerblading
~Outdoors with family
~Boat rides
~Concerts
Summer means having a great time with family and friends in the beautiful outdoors. What's your favorite season?
While the list format makes it very easy to see why summer is your favorite season, did you consider adding some details? I don't feel like there was a lot of substance to the post. I feel like the post would have been more personal if more details had been included about the activities that you like to do over the summer.
ReplyDeleteListing your reasons was a new way of posting, something that was good to try but I agree on the wanting more detail. Maybe like a sentence or two on each, not very long. Or maybe change it to just two to four reasons why you love it so much. Ending with a question was good, i think it's a good way to finish the post, by interacting with your audience.
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